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Wanderings

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As I walk along these endless roads,
afraid to make a turn,
my soul begins to hunger
and my heart begins to burn.

Evil around me chants that I've lost,
my body cries for rest.
But I cannot give up now
or I will fail the test.

The rain beats down upon this path;
the sky turns, blue to black.
Is there light to my left or right,
or is it all at my back?

Will the storm just be a summer rain,
or will it soon turn cold?
Will I be left to walk this path,
or go to where the thunder rolled?
Okay... I had this one about 1/2 thought out during the day, and finished it at night. That's unusual for me, I almost never think during the day, because I'm so accustomed to school.

OK, just for those of you who might be remotely interested, I've got the order in which I wrote the lines :D Lucky you :D
Ready? Here goes: 1,2,3,4,5,12,10,7,8,9,6,11,14,15,16,13
freaky, huh? That's how I do everything. Order bad, chaos good :evillaugh:


all right. Tell me what ya think!
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certifiablenerd's avatar
I like the rhythm of this. Good imagery!

Are you sleeping at all at nights, or just staying up writing and drawing?